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THE TELLING OF ASTROPHEL (Short Story)

 THE TELLING OF ASTROPHEL

(Not from the same project as "ASTROPHEL: A NOVEL IN PROGRESS". Sorry for any confusion. This bit plays with similar themes, but not at all related, or the same. If anything, it is an example of what happens when I write a short story while under the influence of another concept, but short on names that inspire.) 


Oh, ambition. So difficult for some, so easy for

others. Astrophel has loads of it. And had no

idea what to do with it. And like all protagonists,

needs to find a way to change himself and his

situation so that he might overcome his

distracted nature and learn to focus on

something long enough to make a real go of it.

Astrophel has a million ideas. He’s very creative.

And curious. He’s one of those folks who

rambles about from one idea to the next,

switching from one experiment or obsession to

another, though never long enough to actually

get anywhere with it. He fills his head with every

manner of trivia, fantasizing grand schemes and

planning incredible adventures, embedding his

sense of purpose, style, politic with a panicked

frenzy of a lunatic savant, memorizing arbitrary

statistics, inspirations of grandeur frolicking

across his easily impressionable, though well

meaning, fool heart.

And, just as suddenly as the flick of a switch,

he’s off again chasing a new idea.

He’s chased many dreams. Planned out many

schemes.

He’s been a ballroom dancer. Still has the shoes.

He can tap-dance and tango and salsa and

waltz, and often confuses them with each other.

He’s dabbled in photography, having saved up

enough to purchase a halfway decent camera,

then somehow happened into a full darkroom

setup, managed to stumble into extraordinary

commissions in the fashion industry, earning

awards far beyond anyone’s expectations, and

still, his most famous work is the fuzzy

unfocussed double exposure of a butterfly.

He’s been a rock star, writing such unknown

hits as “Baby, Do The Band” and “Rocky

Squirrel Super Hero”. He spent a few hours

inventing the “Electric Kazoo” by soldering the

insides of a microphone into the modified corpse

of a broken plastic toy trumpet. During their

first public performance, he accidentally

electrocuted his lead guitarist with the strange

instrument, whilst attempting a jump kick

crowd surf combo into the sparse eight person

audience occupying a late night coffee shop

they’d unceremoniously invaded as an intended

flash-mob style inaugural concert. A few

minutes later, he was wheeled out, handcuffed

to a gurney by an ambulance attendant and a

police officer reading him his rights. He was

eventually sued for trashing the place in a

hotelroomesque display of, “A little of the ole’

rock and roll Ultraviolence”. The event made the

national news, he was briefly heckled on a late

night talk show monologue, and then forgotten

just as quickly. The rights to the songs were

picked up as jingles for an after-midnight cable

channel info-mercial, and the royalties forfeited

by court order to the coffee shop owner as the

only asset he owned capable of paying for the

damages. The coffee shop owner retired young

when the info-mercial product became a

national franchise.

He’d learned to speak Pandarin fluently, a rare

and virtually unheard of Chinese dialect, and

self-published the first ever phrase book for

American tourists. It was somehow made

required reading for any American Military Staff

visiting China. The book won an International

award for best linguistics based comedy, as

Pandarin is Mandarin translated in the style of

Pig-Latin. As a consequence, he is famous in the

Shenzhen Province of China (EnShayEnZhey,

InaChay). He briefly earned some notoriety as a

spokesmodel for Air China.

Astrophel wished for some sort of meaningful

occupation, though. As much as he felt that he

had experienced interesting things, what he

really wanted to be was a WIZARD. Not a stage

magician playing with rabbits and hats and card

tricks at children’s parties, but someone

committed to figuring out what is worth figuring

out. Writing books on what’s important. The

kind illustrated with a staff and robe and pointy

hat and room full of fancy old books and a

stuffed two headed raven and a big gold

medallion (No, not like a gangsta rapper. Well,

okay, KINDA like a gangsta rapper).

He was aware, though, that Wizards are not all

that common, and that two headed ravens

couldn’t just be acquired at just any pawn

broker shop or convenience store. (He did know

a couple of rappers that he might hit up for a big

gold medallion, but really, he’d settle for a room

full of books and the secrets of the universe). He

also realized that real life wizards didn’t wear big

robes and pointy hats. But they did have

bookshelves full of books, they know the secrets

of what activities give life Meaning and Purpose.

But where could he find the path that would give

him access to the esoteric secrets that are

known only to the Wizardly Adepts? Where do

they hang out? He checked the phone book. All

he could find was an advertisement for “Bill

Gizard, Septic Wizard. We’ll Hocus Pocus your

pipes and Abracadabra your toilets or your

Money Back!”

He called, and left a message on the answering

machine, asking if Mr. Gizard knew of any two

headed ravens for sale.

Next he tried the newspaper classifieds. He

found a Fortune Teller named Trixie who also

offered “relaxation massage”, “love potions for

lonely hearts” and “psychic tarot readings”.

He called and a rough sounding deep voiced

woman answered the phone. She’d sounded like

she made her living smoking cigarettes and

gargling with whiskey sours. He set an

appointment for later that evening. Even if she

couldn’t put him in touch with someone of the

Wizardish ilk, at least he’d get that knot in his

shoulders attended to, and maybe some lotto

numbers.

He stood outside of the door, having knocked on

the window. There was a sign in the heavily

draped window that glowed with a neon yellow

hand, three big yellow lines crossing its palm.

The door opened, and for a second, he hesitated

before entering. The warm air from the darkened

hallway beyond smelled of sweet spices and

incense.

Madame Trixie was unlike anyone Astrophel had

ever met before. Her face was much younger

than he’d expected from her voice on the phone.

She seemed in her early thirties, her hair

covered in long blond messy hair, blue eyes, and

freckles absolutely everywhere. Even her fingers.

No makeup, but large bright peacock feather

ear-rings. She was voluptuous, and curvy, but

tall and smiling. Again, he was kind of surprised

to see that she had all of her teeth, and that they

were pearly white. Her breath smelled like Juicy

Fruit, not cigarette smoke. Or whiskey sours.

The next thing he noticed was her colorful

paisley dress which couldn’t seem to keep from

slipping off of her shoulder, revealing no bra

strap, and much of where the bra might have

existed, had it existed at all. Every second or

three she’d readjust the overly wide collar from

slipping loosely down her shoulder. Astrophel

couldn’t help but be ashamed for noticing that

the adjustment only served to reveal the mass of

freckles between her breasts. But he went on

noticing anyway. She had large, gaudy silver

rings on every finger, her nails short, the french

style manicure tipping each finger with a bright

white crescent moon. Her wrists jangled with a

collection of bangles. As she adjusted the dress

again, he saw the astrological symbol for

Sagittarius on her shoulder, a kind of bow and

arrow motif. He recognized it from the horoscope

in the newspaper.

She reached for his hand, turned it face up and

inspected the palm, her hands soft, her gaze

firm as she traced the lines and wiggled the

fingers, testing flexibility, and squeezing the

raised mounts and fingertips. And freckles. And

crazy amounts of gaudy jewelry. She didn’t

speak.

Not letting go of his hand, she led him into a

room down the hall. The door closed behind

him. He noted that the walls were covered in

framed paintings and photographs. They crossed

into the room. The far wall was heavily draped,

but he could see a slight luminescence of the

yellow neon light through the fabric. The table

occupying the middle of the room was draped

with a burgundy cloth, and at its centre, a glass

globe on a gold stand. The room was dimly lit, a

few candles flickered from a side table, and a

shelf crammed full of books and a variety of

ornaments.

She pulled out a chair from the table for him,

and then pulled another from the opposite side

of the table right next to his. She sat, again

adjusting the dress which was still slipping

down her freckled arm, nearly too far down her

front. The tattoo somehow looked at home in the

dim light.

“So.” She spoke, clearly, a mid-western

American accent, not grizzled nor deep, but still

smelling of Juicy Fruit. “Mister Astrophel. Cool

name. I like it. Ever had a reading before?”

“Uh, no.” He glanced around the room, suddenly

aware that his mouth was dry, and was very

aware of her proximity, her knee just barely

resting against his thigh. He looked back and

her eyes caught his. Not all blue. Some specks of

green and a bit of brown at the edges. The spicy

incense wafted by, he swallowed to moisten his

lips, and found that he had no idea how to

approach the topic on his mind. She fascinated

him. He was overwhelmed with tension.

“Okay”, she stood up, turning towards the

bookcase, the dress slipping off of her shoulder

again, as she grabbed a small bundle, wrapped

up in a navy blue silk kerchief. She sat again

and untied the knot, revealing a deck of cards,

larger than playing cards, and the images like

old colorful woodcuts. She handed him the

deck,”This is going to be fun. We’re gonna take a

deep dive into what makes you tick, alright?

Just shuffle. Go ahead.” He took the cards, and

began shuffling, slowly at first, then faster as his

hands adjusted to their weight and size. “Okay,

now, when you think they’re shuffled enough,

cut them into three piles. With your left hand.”

He did as he was told, and she took the three

stacks and placed them one on top of the other,

right, then left, then the centre. She squared up

the pile, looked up at his face, which seemed a

little nervous.

“Okay, here we go. She flipped over the first

card, laying it on he table between them. “This

card reveals what is troubling you.” The image

was a dancing baboon, wearing checkered

motley, crowned by a donkey eared hat. In one

hand was a chicken headed scepter, and the

other was reaching out to grab at a butterfly.

The dancing baboon was accompanied by a little

white dog, nipping at the monkey’s tail. The

butterfly was leading the distracted baboon over

a cliff’s edge towards certain death.

“Ooh, you’re off on an adventure, but you have

no idea where you’re going, how you’re going to

get there, and what you’re going to do once you

arrive. Thing is, you are distracted by foolish

things, and pay no attention to what is actually

important. You don’t appreciate that which you

should be grateful for, those things that you are

already good at, or the trusted companions who

already want your attention. You go off making

fair weather friends, whose names you can’t

even pronounce properly.

She paused, looking up at him. He could see

himself in the monkey’s face. The little dog, his

ignored little companion. And the cliff. Certain

death. Meaningless death. Purposeless life.

“Geeze”, he announced, “Pretty much sums it

up. I guess.”

“It’s not all bad. Look, you are not paying

attention to the things you already have, the

people that love you, the stuff you’ve done. You

keep fucking up because you keep chasing

dreams that won’t fulfill you. You need to get

grounded and start paying attention. Stop trying

to do all of the things, and settle down and enjoy

what you have. If you don’t someday you’ll find

that it has all passed you by and you’re out of

time. Start committing to what’s right in front of

you.” She held his gaze. Then flipped another

card.

‘The second card is your solution. It’s what will

inspire you to right your wrongs, to become a

better person. It will ground you, give you

purpose, keep you focussed instead of obsessing

over unimportant details, keep you on task. It

will root you, and keep you from wandering,

because it is all you have ever wanted, but never

realized until you were willing to seek help.”

The card showed a woman, full bodied, relaxed,

elegantly occupying a throne, wearing a

revealing dress which flowed around her like

water. She was surrounded by symbols of

majesty. Her foot rested upon a large white

crescent moon. To her right, leaning against her

throne was a hunting bow and a quiver full of

arrows. At an angle, resting against the other

side of the throne was a heraldic shield, its

surface painted with a double headed eagle. Her

blond hair held a crown of stars, a male peacock

with its tail in full mating display spread behind

her throne.

“All powerful patriarchs through history had a

partner, an insightful, wise, strong woman as

their companion. The Empress was a Muse, not

only his, but the Mother of their people, loved,

cherished, honored. She was the decadent

symbol of abundance, fertility, inspiration,

honor, and love. Where the patriarch tended to

be a violent, active, and powerful, she was

passive, peaceful, reasoning. She is the purpose

worth fighting for. The Pax Romana, the Peace of

Rome. Peace Enforcing Violence. Violence

Enforcing Peace. The Double Headed Eagle of

Empire was the symbol of that ability to exist in

both worlds, to Rule and to Serve. The Bow and

Arrows show that she is capable of violence as

well. She is a hunter, a provider, a soldier, and a

protector. She does not rest when others work.

She is a mother, and all mothers are life givers.

All mothers are givers of life. Not only through

the womb, but also through the milk of her

breast, the meat from her bow, the education

from her mind, the affection from her heart,

generational wisdom from her lips, and the

ageless source of culture, which surpasses

empires and cultures. She is the Mother whose

name is Goddess.”

“So, I need a Mother?” He queried, focused on

the double headed black eagle. There it is. His

two headed crow. Only not a crow. Still. Same

diff.

“No, Astrophel. You need a partner who will set

you straight and give you a sense of purpose. An

equal. A Muse. Someone to think about other

than yourself. Maybe someone who is a mother,

she is a symbol of motherhood and all that gives

life and nurtures. But she is also a Muse. An

inspiration. A reason to do what you do, and it is

her counsel, leadership, guidance and wisdom

that provides what you are missing. You need

someone who is a role model, someone to

challenge you. The Empress is a person who can

hold your attention, whose Word you treat as

Law. Nothing else could hold your focus like

someone that you want to please, that you

would do anything for, because you Love that

person more than you love yourself.” She

paused, holding his eyes with hers again, “You

need love. You need to find your heart. Whatever

it is that has kept you from experiencing your

family and friends as those who give you

purpose, that is what you are missing.”

Friends. Family. Meaning. Purpose. Other than

himself. She held his gaze. He was dizzied by her

scent, her presence, her proximity, her freckles.

He was dizzied by her. Everything that he

wanted he could sense in her. That power of

universal intelligence. That Library of secrets.

Wisdom. Meaning. Love. He fell into her gaze. At

that moment, for once in his aimless life, he

understood what it was that he was missing.

She looked down at the deck, a blush crossing

her cheeks. “Now, your outcome. But, before we

see what it is that the Fates have in store for

you, I have to ask you to cross my hand with

silver, as that is the ancient way. Please.”

He reached into his pocket, pulling out his

wallet. Past generations have practiced this rite

of transformation and acceptance of

responsibility. The price paid is a token,

exchanged as a form of reinforcement,

demanding that one choose to give their desires

form, manifesting that wish into physical form,

solidified by perceived value. Were Astrophel an

ancient seeker after the light, this exchange

might have been made with a purse of coins and

gems. Were he his grandfather, a blank cheque,

bonified and guaranteed, Paid To The Order of

TRIXIE THE GODDESS MUSE EMPRESS AND

PRIMORDIAL MOTHER TO THE AGES. If he

were his Father, he would hand over a members

only credit card, exclusive and held only by

those with a certain breed of fiscal aptitude. But,

he was Astrophel, who had a heart of gold and a

only the smallest pittance upon which to

represent his value to society, little of

significance, but enough to beg a momentary

credit with familiar bartenders. He pulled out a

wallet containing $83.35. He counted out $80.

Then put back $20, and handed her $60. She

glanced at the three bills, and tucked them

under her left breast, held in place by sweat and

gravity and the ancient blessings of all

Goddesses whose bosoms packed away trinkets

and cash alike.

She plucked the final card from the top of the

pile and laid it on top of the last two, it’s spirit

as awe inspiring and effective as those which

came before it. She described it, her voice curt,

tight, and with a depth of certainty that he

couldn’t ignore, since it was the voice of the

Fates, and it held him in thrall. He could feel

something beneath his feet shift, his heart

moved, and his mind quaked.

“The Wheel, reversed. There are those capable of

seeing past the hazy veils of time and space,

having studied history which shows the patterns

of mankind’s unwavering vanity and vice. There

are those who have not the fortitude for drawing

themselves past the walls of unfortunate

certainty, whose morality is as skewed as their

wish filled prayers, petitioning the Gods with

empty promises and swollen vows and wanton

vinegar, “Give me Wine and I will Plant for your

Grapes!” and when the wine is poured, they offer

the Gods of the Earth only piss and vomit. There

are those who spite Fortuna’s favor on a

desperate cast, stripped of mangy dignity, for

slow, but certain calculated investment is

beyond the whim and woe of their patience.

The wheel promises certainty to none, even they

who have practicable and assured knowing, they

who dare to calculate all paths through failure

and success, they who commit themselves with

indominable willingness towards ensured

outcomes, and to keep silent their methods,

giving no opportunity for excuse nor the keys for

their own undoing, since silence is its own

proverbial reward, and by a loose tongue are

certain rewards for spies, thieves and devils.”

Astrophel, leaving the hazy room, found that his

head cleared once he reached the foyer, and

exited the door towards the street. It cleared to

sharp focus as he trod the pavement towards the

nearest pub, one which he had frequented often.

The clarity remained until his lips touched the

pint glass, and was forgotten by the time the

final drips reached his throat.

Esoteric favor may find us all, in those moments

between here and there. For the common mind,

it will remain hidden, layered in lyrics and

fantasy. For the committed few, it will become

the secrets of wisdom, passionately sought after,

meditated upon, penetrated and given form by

the light of experience. For the sceptic,

enlightenment becomes a hollow thing,

purposeless and stagnant. And for those

occasional few, wisdom comes upon them, so

suddenly impactful that they pass beyond the

veil, their lives no longer beholden to the wheel

of incarnation. Stranded in the liminal, and

incapable of grasping much more than freckles

and Juicy Fruit, Astrophel continued his search

for significance. Sixty dollars wasn’t too much of

a price for a lesson ignored. Not everyone is

meant to rise above their current state of being.


Unknown Artist, from Taylor Caldwell's 1952 novel 
"The Devil's Advocate", published by Pyramid Press.
If you know who the artist is, I would very much like to 
find out who they were and add attribution as appropriate.